This was too relatable 😩 Felt myself in your shoes when you described the dread after first seeing the cut (although I have never had the courage to offer critique in the moment -- let alone even know what critique to offer in the midst of my disappointment). I think the piece could have started with the hair salon scene, or offered a brief description of the Fleabag scene earlier on so the reference at the end could be a loop. Minor and subjective suggestions. Overall, very relatable piece, with your usual wit and usual courage in openly sharing both your ups and downs. (P.S. your expression in the pic has me cackling :’)
No, It's Not a Wig
This was too relatable 😩 Felt myself in your shoes when you described the dread after first seeing the cut (although I have never had the courage to offer critique in the moment -- let alone even know what critique to offer in the midst of my disappointment). I think the piece could have started with the hair salon scene, or offered a brief description of the Fleabag scene earlier on so the reference at the end could be a loop. Minor and subjective suggestions. Overall, very relatable piece, with your usual wit and usual courage in openly sharing both your ups and downs. (P.S. your expression in the pic has me cackling :’)